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Hi! I’m Poado, a builder and 3D modeler. I specialize in cafes and similar builds. Back in 2020 I posted about the first cafe I made in a year and got some great feedback (thank you!). I recently finished a new cafe that I had started in early 2021 before taking another long break. It’s furnished with a small terrain, but no scripts or food models. I think I’ve made some improvements from my last cafe even after continuously going on building hiatuses. So just looking for some feedback! (also… valuation?) Any and all feedback/criticism is welcome and appreciated. Thanks, everyone! -All assets were made by me -Lighting is not my speciality lol -Currently not for hire Photos11 Likes
Empty Space First off, great cafe it looks nice I like the colours however the inside seems fairly empty as there’s not a lot of tables and chairs I don’t mean to just spam table and chairs around but just try find somethings to fill in the spaces, apart from that good job 8.5/10 7 Likes
As a simple idea, you could try to detail the pillars slightly as currently they look a bit plain. 3 Likes
I recently release V2 for my cafe, and I would really appreciate any constructive feedback/criticism. Game link: 🌴 Ardour Cafe V2 - Roblox 12 Likes
The build looks great, but lightings feels really off, it just looks bad. You really need to improve it 1 Like
Could you provide some examples and solutions?
I like it. Very modern and very well built, definitely took your time on it!
I think that it’ll look so much better with realistic graphics and other buildings around it. Awesome job! Edit: I joined the game and was stunned to see the main menu, you’re a very talented gui designer, programmer, and builder! 2 Likes
Thank you very much for the feedback!
Turn on shadows, add some lights, work with ambient lighting, add some sunrays and others 1 Like
I have updated the lighting based on the feedbacks!
Looks great but some areas feel slightly empty, also the metals are too reflective (fixable with a lighter roughness map)
Thank you for the feedback! I will consider making those changes. |